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Dead Now by =Skitsofrenika:iconSkitsofrenika:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Transgressive > Fixed




Ravaged brain and squinting eyes.
Corseted and buckled spine.
Mind left to waste
your hair a mess
and insides black.
Vocal chords reprise in whines.

Stab my back and pull my hair.
Rob my clothes and leave me bare.
A naked puppet bleeding while you tangled strings.
No one
noticed
no one cared.

You thought you won the game
had caused me pain
and left me meaningless.
You thought you'd left my corpse
for dead in your mind's twisted
mess.
Silly girl, you're tangled in my strings now, bitch.
Drag your carcass to your
nest.

Bruised blue hands and nails
bent back.
Mouth foaming and eyes rolled back.
The square pegs in your mouth are rotting from the filth you spit.

To the floor your
skull did
smack...
©2008-2009 =Skitsofrenika
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Submitted: September 4, 2008
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Had to write stuff down... *cackle*
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~Chilly-Winds:iconChilly-Winds: Sep 5, 2008, 5:50:16 AM
niice :D

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Everything starts with imagination.
=Skitsofrenika:iconSkitsofrenika: Sep 5, 2008, 5:56:55 AM
Thank you! ^^

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I'm so happy! (AHA!) Happy go lucky me!
I just go my way, living everyday~
*Serenity-Falls:iconSerenity-Falls: Sep 6, 2008, 1:36:25 AM
Fuck me, powerful stuff lady!

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"Sex is like pizza. Even when it's bad, it's still fucking pizza." - =CleverConveyence

=StarKissedSapphire - We are sisters at heart, just miles apart :heart:
=Skitsofrenika:iconSkitsofrenika: Sep 6, 2008, 1:38:13 AM
Aww thank you so much.
I never know whether my poetry is ever good or not, glad you like it! :hug:

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I'm so happy! (AHA!) Happy go lucky me!
I just go my way, living everyday~
*Serenity-Falls:iconSerenity-Falls: Sep 6, 2008, 1:42:46 AM
This created images in my head! Spooky ones! :fear:

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"Sex is like pizza. Even when it's bad, it's still fucking pizza." - =CleverConveyence

=StarKissedSapphire - We are sisters at heart, just miles apart :heart:
=Skitsofrenika:iconSkitsofrenika: Sep 6, 2008, 1:44:47 AM
XDD aha, thank you!
I was trying to make it visual, but it's hard when words are.. words! o.O

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I'm so happy! (AHA!) Happy go lucky me!
I just go my way, living everyday~
*Serenity-Falls:iconSerenity-Falls: Sep 7, 2008, 6:20:48 AM
Well, you did an awesome job, I can assure you!

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"Sex is like pizza. Even when it's bad, it's still fucking pizza." - =CleverConveyence

=StarKissedSapphire - We are sisters at heart, just miles apart :heart:
~charcoal012:iconcharcoal012: Jan 4, 2009, 7:12:58 AM
very beautiful work. i enjoyed reading it
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